Tag: Narrative

Narrative Writing Activity W2 – Term 2


Elena is a smart, beautiful and happy princess. She loves everyone and everyone loves her.She goes to an excellent school. Her friends are Liana, Emily and Evelyn. She does good in school and makes friends instantly, at home she respects her elders and does what she’s told.

One lovely sunny morning the four girls are taking their usual route to school ,and out of nowhere a really bad man that is known for stealing people’s valuables appears in front of the four girls. They are frightened. Elena then asks him what he wants and he replies by telling them to give him their valuables and just as Liana,Emily and Evelyn were about to take their valuables Elena told them to stop and that she wasn’t scared of him. With a smirk on his face he took out a knife from his pocket and said “ give me your valuables or I will KILL you. Elena got in his face and said looks like you’re gonna have to kill me because I would die before letting you take my things. Scared of his consequences if he kills the princess he runs away and says this isn’t over. I will be back. Getting to school Elena and her friends did get in trouble for being late but then got to their work while talking about what that thief meant when he said that it was OVER and he was coming BACK. Her friends were concerned for her safety so when they were about to depart for school as the girls just picked Elena up from school they decided that they were going to walk her home as well so she would be safe and nothing would happen to her.They tried to catch up to Elena but when they got to her house assuming she was safe and just ran home because of the man they saw on there way to school they knocked on the door expecting Elena to and answer but instead they were answered by the house butler and were shocked when he asked if Elena was with them. They then started freaking out and wondering where she could be then they remembered that the thief told them. They went back to where they remember getting stopped by the man and soon realised that she could just be with the ogre she always talks about to her friends.They then went to where Elena said she would be if she wasn’t at home after school and they went there so they gave the ogre a visit and he then told them that she was there a minute ago and would probably be heading home now but they told the ogre that they just came from her house and he told then that she likes to take a short cut so they went to her house and she was indeed there and safe.

In conclusion Elena was safe the thief came back but Elena had a plan and had him captured and he spent a long time in jail and everyone got their stuff back.